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In Theorem 12.2 it says "Assume that the loop transfer function L(s) is such that sL(s) goes to zero as s -> inf, then the sensitivity function satisfies the following integral:". This sentence either needs to be split up into two sentences by replacing the comma with a period, or it needs to be rephrased (such as "Assume" -> "Assuming").
 
In Theorem 12.2 it says "Assume that the loop transfer function L(s) is such that sL(s) goes to zero as s -> inf, then the sensitivity function satisfies the following integral:". This sentence either needs to be split up into two sentences by replacing the comma with a period, or it needs to be rephrased (such as "Assume" -> "Assuming").

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Edition Second
Version number 3.0h
Submission date 11/22/2016
Your name Chanud Yasanayake
E-mail address cyasanay@caltech.edu
Chapter 12.6
Page number 12-30
Line number 18
Current status Pending

In Theorem 12.2 it says "Assume that the loop transfer function L(s) is such that sL(s) goes to zero as s -> inf, then the sensitivity function satisfies the following integral:". This sentence either needs to be split up into two sentences by replacing the comma with a period, or it needs to be rephrased (such as "Assume" -> "Assuming").