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In Theorem 12.2 it says "Assume that the loop transfer function L(s) is such that sL(s) goes to zero as s -> inf, then the sensitivity function satisfies the following integral:". This sentence either needs to be split up into two sentences by replacing the comma with a period, or it needs to be rephrased (such as "Assume" -> "Assuming"). | In Theorem 12.2 it says "Assume that the loop transfer function L(s) is such that sL(s) goes to zero as s -> inf, then the sensitivity function satisfies the following integral:". This sentence either needs to be split up into two sentences by replacing the comma with a period, or it needs to be rephrased (such as "Assume" -> "Assuming"). | ||
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| Edition | Second |
|---|---|
| Version number | 3.0h |
| Submission date | 11/22/2016 |
| Your name | Chanud Yasanayake |
| E-mail address | cyasanay@caltech.edu |
| Chapter | 12.6 |
| Page number | 12-30 |
| Line number | 18 |
| Current status | Pending |
In Theorem 12.2 it says "Assume that the loop transfer function L(s) is such that sL(s) goes to zero as s -> inf, then the sensitivity function satisfies the following integral:". This sentence either needs to be split up into two sentences by replacing the comma with a period, or it needs to be rephrased (such as "Assume" -> "Assuming").
